The Haki unlock was super forced in my opinion. It came in at the last minute, emotional distress pops in at post 13 while the topic is only 15 post long. I get that your character was in a situation where they perceive they are about to die, but as a reader and for you as a writer, you should understand that's a pretty generic method to go about things. There was so much more you could have done to unlock haki. I'm not going to go into the usage of it, but with this being the first attempt to unlock haki on this site, I can't let this be the slippery slope that lets everyone glide by with a 2 poster of unlocking haki, both post being right at the bare minimum of required words. Haki Unlock Denied.

I will reward you for the Voyage of course. The writing was nice, you had interesting elements with the elfs and I like how it wasn't just a beat em up topic all the way through, but it had a beginning, middle, and end. My advice for when you you try to unlock Haki again, make the topic centered on that. No voyage, no bounty hunt, w.e. Make it a regular ol' topic that you just rp in and take the time to make it about unlocking haki through w.e. means u want. The way you did it here just seemed like "i'm gonna do the xmas event . . . might as well try to unlock haki while i'm at it."

22M Beli x2 44M
3M bounty (not really a topic that'd get WG attention) x2 6M Bounty
1 Doriki x2 2 Doriki
1 Prestige Point x2 2 Prestige Points