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1KillZone Empty KillZone Sun Jan 06, 2019 11:38 am

Ghost

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Ghost
Equipment Name: Killzone( heavy)
Equipment Description: Kill Zone is a heavy Glory rifle with 5 shots in the clip. Which is a single shot each.It can travel up to 100 meters at 5 speed and hitting at a power of 3. It's nose is 40 inches long and its eye is 2 inches wide. It is dark grey and has an attached belt. Which the user can use to put around his back. The rifle trigger is fairly light and easy to set off. A safety switch is located right at the top. Right by its magazine clip. The user will need to have good focus to use this classic. But it is a very deadly medium or long-range shot up to the giving meter.
The rifle is made out of iron and hardwood.

Equipment Grade: Skillful Grade

Speed-5
Power-5
Range-100m
Weight-8 lbs

Link to where I got it :https://strawhats.rpg-board.net/t3236p120-week-of-greatness#22122



Last edited by Ghost on Sun Feb 03, 2019 10:51 pm; edited 9 times in total

2KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Sun Jan 06, 2019 11:44 am

Ghost

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This is ready

3KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Sun Jan 06, 2019 11:53 am

Soundless Void

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This was not mentioned in your app as I forgot about it but your rp sample was not what we were looking for in quality as thus you did not earn a starter plot and have to earn it in a GV.

4KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Sun Jan 06, 2019 12:04 pm

Ghost

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Ghost
Winged look I redid it and put the link. It should be good to go

5KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Tue Jan 08, 2019 6:12 pm

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Ghost wrote:Equipment Name: KillZone
Equipment Description: Kill Zone is a light sniper rifle with 5 shots in the clip. It can travel up to 75 meters at 7 speed. It can also hit at power of 3. It's nose is 55 inches long and its eye is 3 inches wide. It is dark blue and has an attached belt. Which the user can use to put around his back. The sniper trigger is fairly light and easy to set off. A safety switch is located right at the top. Right by its scoop glass. Which is 5 meters long and 3 meters wide. It also has a laser beam which can travel up to 75 meters as well.
Equipment Grade: Skillful Gtade

Link to where I got it :https://strawhats.rpg-board.net/t3236p120-week-of-greatness#22122

Sniper Rifles
are not Light Artillery, they are Heavy, which are not allowed at Skillful Grade. You can have a regular smegular rifle with plus one in a parameter but that's about it. That falls into Medium Category.

6KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Tue Jan 08, 2019 7:03 pm

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Ghost
Right made some major changes seeing how I was short-handing myself. This should do it.

7KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Wed Jan 09, 2019 5:56 pm

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Devroux
You were told no sniper rifles, said you edited it, then still have a sniper rifle listed. The weapon is denied. Try again.

8KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Wed Jan 09, 2019 7:56 pm

Ghost

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Ghost
I did not know he meant no sniper rifles. But I remade it to just a rifle just a plain on classic of a beauty rifle. But I was under the impression that sniper rifles fall under the skillful grade weapons I guess not.

9KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Mon Jan 14, 2019 6:08 pm

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Ghost
Ready again staff

10KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Fri Jan 25, 2019 3:16 pm

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Ghost
Looking for the review please

11KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:45 pm

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Medium artillery has 5 speed and 4 power, you took away -1 power and still have an extra +1 to give the weapon.

Also, you put 120M at the top and then 150M at the bottom, this is medium ranged weaponry and should be 100 because range multiplier isn't allowed until its Saijo O'wazamono

12KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Sun Feb 03, 2019 8:35 pm

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Ok it is fixed ready

13KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Sun Feb 03, 2019 9:45 pm

Soundless Void

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You still forgot to add a +1 to either Speed or Power

14KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Sun Feb 03, 2019 10:51 pm

Ghost

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Ghost
Ok i added it to speed

15KillZone Empty Re: KillZone Mon Feb 04, 2019 9:38 am

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